Zekkie876

This has really helped me. A lot. THANKS!

Lately I've been having trouble introducing my main character. One problem that's bugged me was that I couldn't really describe him/her properly. Getting all the facial angles, hair, build, and ...

This was a nice piece overall, but it could use some work. Add a bit more description, and give some creative spice to it. Make the reader feel absorbed into ...

Whenever I submit a piece, a page comes up that says "General Error", and a bunch of other stuff, and basically its not letting me submit anything. Do you know ...

nice job I've read the Ranger's Apprentice series, and I must say that you did a great job You wrote in a way that I felt like I was reading ...

Overall I liked this poem, so good job. ^^already explained most of it so I'm just going to say a few things: The capitalized words had me going for a ...

I really liked this poem, and I thought it was amazng Really nice job Now I want to see when the moon is bigger than the sun :)

Yes I am Zeraby's little brother I introduced him to the site, and, like me, was drawn to it like a moth to the flame Isn't that right,, Zer-zer?

hmmmmmm, do I know you?

A new novel, Ghost Story, is coming out, but I don't know when

This was a great story! I wasn't suspecting the udden twist at the end until the last paragraph. This was really well written. Just a few errors "I was ahead ...

loved it

Chapter 1: The Initiation Flashes. I gripped my head, mind reeling in pain. More flashes, sudden moments of pitch darkness, as if going through a tunnel. I knew I was ...

Thi is really good, and like all the other guys, I loved the Giver. keep up the good work!

I really liked it, gives an exhilirating opening to what seems like a nice piece. The errors are pretty much summed up above me goodjob :)