Zeige

Thanks for the crit i apriciate it my folks jus say 'yea thats great' and not tell me what i need to improve and yea i agree with what you ...

its a sub-plot but its a big part that i want the charaters to go through

Yeah thanks sure somthing will pop up to leave things in peices for them the poor little fools :P Dance little puppets dance! i've already got her a bit paranoid ...

its proberbly my fault but so far they've been smiling and giggleing with eachother etc and at the start of chpt3 they're at a formal ceremany and they end up ...

reminds me of zombie movies when they chant Brains! Brains! but also could be a story about a young boy genius reminding me of Dexters lab so maybe for a ...

okay i'm in the middle of the third chapter of my story and the two charecters who end up together near the end are already getting a bit close and ...

save up for a new car and not crash it (fingers crossed)

One of the characters in my story not me okay hope that works now

i only have 6 at the moment my old dear took all my old ones to an oxfam shop a few months ago all they were doing was gathering dust

i do this sometimes usally when i'm bored, i just watch tv or something and scribble down notes and ideas in a notebook, granted most of the time its garbage ...

if its important to the charector describe it as if it was part of them as if it was an exstension of their bodies if you know what i mean. ...

i'm in tha middle of 'The Righteous Men' by Sam Bourne at the minute, its really good

i got money mostly plus a few bits n peices and a pool table

i could only get 34 i prolly missed the most obvious ones

lol happy days alright