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The errand boy ran through the dark shadows of the castle, his green satin cloak trailing behind. As the young boy rounded a corner his cloak made a whipping sound ...

This is a really nice poem! It is full of emotion and is very powerful. I just love every line because it portrays so much emotion. Great work :)

This is a really good poem! I really love the story that it tells as it is very true and very wise. You could perhaps develop your thoughts a little ...

What a beautiful peom! I really liked reading it and love the meaning behind each and every single word. I believe that the sun will arrive tomorrow. I believe that ...

Whoa! These are really great! I love the look of them both and could stare at them for ages! Great work!

This is really quite an intruiging piece and has me very much interested. I can't wait to read more when you write it! He fell so hard for her that ...

Im not usually that big on poetry but this poem of yours is quite beautiful! It has some really wonderful thoughts and ideas that make it a compelling read. I ...

I actually quite liked this piece in a strange way. It is slightly confusing and I'm not really sure what the point is but it is something different. However, the ...

Great story! It's very descriptive which really helps me to picture what you're saying and become apart of the story! I loved basically everything about it. It really drew me ...

The woman lay on the bed panting, a distorted mess amongst the twisted blankets. She let out a spluttered cough as moonlight shone through the frosty window creating an eerie ...

The cover looks great! The colours are really effective and make the knife and diamond stand out. The plain white font is very simple yet very much effective! It is ...

This is such honest poetry which really makes it all the more special. You have a great way with words and I encourage you to keep writing like this and ...

Wow I really like this poem. For me it seems to have so much important meaning behind it for such a small poem. The metaphors you used really help to ...

Chapter One Jack Linsel started at the ceiling with a blank expression, letting his mind wander. He had been lying in bed doing this for little over an hour since ...