ZebraSkittles

Firstly, Yes! Another Wonderland wanderer! Secondly,I loved the first Poem. It was very descriptive and brings a lot to mind. Thirdly, I liked your second poem but it was very ...

This is pretty good work here, Biffle. Makes me curious who you wrote it about or if you just made it up though. :lol: But anyway back to the point. ...

Your critic here! This was very good but remember that format is very important. A new paragraph needs to be formed when there is a new speaker at least, so ...

Wow. This was amazing. It was very repetitive, though. Change it around, add imagery or metaphors. Make it a more interesting read, something that will completely hook someone. Its sometimes ...

I'm speechless. That was one of the most amazing stories i have ever read. And i have read alot. I didn't catch on to the sucide thing until the end, ...

I loved it!! It was a mysterious and dangerous story from the beginning, but it was almost a little expected that he would kill her. That just what "dark knights" ...