ZanyPlebeian

I know what pyres are.

It seemed like a poorly done rant to me. Drop the rhyme and always think super-hard before calling comeone a bitch in a poem (or anywhere)...it's very, very juvenile.

I wrote it stream of consciousness--when I was writing it a powerful childhood image came to mind and I couldn't shake it. The poem demanded to be included in my ...

This one didn't really do as much for me as some of your recent stuff...I don't know why you decided to rhyme this. Was it just something randomly decided? To ...

Lost In Yours I lost my hand in yours and we walked the same old route, lost my hand like it’s not been lost before, as we spoke of lake ...

"Poem to xantham gum" was shockingly wonderful! Felt like something I would have read a hardened expatriate American romance poet write....definitely love it.

Hellcat I'm a hellcat I write to little children letters about little Christmas angels run over by cars on highways I write about you and how some people would kill ...

I feel like this is too bland, too plain...and PEOPLE: haiku does not mean just 5-7-5...that's the form it is in, but the haiku exists to comment on nature...there are ...

Another beautiful poem! I can't even significantly comment on it because it's soooo good. I hate just slathering comments on people, so I'll try to think of omething to criticize. ...

Oooo...intriguing...I really like the flow of this poem, and the pace it goes. Oftentimes I find it hard for poetry (especially mine!) to keep up with the crazy pace of ...

Wonderful!! The best poem I've read here since I've been here, certainly! No major changes besides some minor typos. Keep it up! -Brian

I thought it was a good idea moderately executed...and that a few edits could do you good.

Poet: Allen Ginsberg. Poem: "Howl." Very long poem, visit if you're interested.

Though you may have had a message to relay through further writing, I really like it just the way it is.

Wow!! I must say, this is one of the most refreshing rhymed poems I've read in a long while. The words you use to express yourself are just beautiful and ...