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Re: 2-5-06
"I'm sorry I used words you particularly, despise, would you care to give me a list of the ones you personally hate so I can avoid using those concepts in ...
Feb 10, 2006 -
Re: 2-5-06
The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly: The Good "We never read the shapes of words anymore, nor the succulent-smooth taste nor their echoey sound in mighty cathedrals nor their ...
Feb 10, 2006 -
Re: breakfast with timmy
Like the images a lot--I can identify with them. The casual style of the poem works, and yet I feel something more needs to be done with it. "I just ...
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Deleted
*I apologize*
Jan 18, 2006 -
Re: Are Antidepressants given too freely?
Speaking as a person on antidepressants, I can say that they aren't over-prescribed. They are a godsend to those of us who can't cope in other ways, or those of ...
Nov 15, 2005 -
Re: Where Ghosts Come Together With Other Ghosts
Very well-written. I can percieve a mature voice in this poem, and the somewhat sad, yet content outlook that I picked up from it is very satisfying to me. Add ...
Nov 12, 2005 -
Re: Wide and Quaking Blue
I enjoyed this poem. You gave me plenty of imagery and it had a meaningful, somewhat depressing, message. I like that the mechanics of this poem did not have any ...
Nov 12, 2005 -
Re: Dead Cat's Dead
"Dead Cat's Dead" We used to think that the buffet table was free and that whatever we desired from it was meant to be ours. I used to think that ...
Nov 8, 2005
