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[/quote] "Teenagers go through different stages of development, now for men these changes are slow, gradual, almost unnoticeable to those around them, unlike women... you can blink and everything abou

I didn't read all of this, after I got halfway through it was too hard to read. Your writing is incredibly detailed and intricate, as if your trying to squeeze ...

What an intriguing piece of writing. At first I was a little confused at where you were going with this but obviously it seems to of gone somewhere as I ...

There was drum roll. It was raining; it always did on days like these, although you could see the sunrise from the east. The cold rain felt odd on his ...

I think you really achieved what you were aiming for here. The element of mystery really captured me, in a kind of sad, numb curious way. I am not a ...

"I am from the class of the oppressed, the abused, the downtrodden. We might be broken, but we are resilient, irrepressible, and together we’ll rise like a wave." I love ...