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Overall I thinks its great and interesting but I still think that there can be some expanding done in some places for example could you expand on the speakers emotions? ...

Good story, I also think it should go into sci-fi. It has a rather abrupt ending, and in some places you could have expanded. For example, the doctors personality. Maybe ...

Hello, I loved this story. A boy living during the Cold War at the end of the Cuban Missile Crisis, I love this setting! The story touched me as I ...

Sir Dacron pressed his horse on through the rain. Thunder rolled ominously above them. It was not often that Dacron felt fear, but now it had wrapped its iron hand ...

Intriguing and dramatic, I like it. I don't see how this is related to the Red Scare, but I do see some relation to the Cold War. I admit I'm ...

For 4 short paragraphs that was interesting, a lot way conveyed in that small thing. How the soldier felt while on a mission, on the battlefield, after the war and ...

I liked the story, however nothing much happens in it other than us learning that there is a banker coming and a conversation between the main character and her mother. ...

I loved it, and the button thing is interesting too. At first I wondered what the button you were referring to was, then I read it and I think I ...

I liked the story (a good Detective story gets me going), but there are a few things that I would like to point out. First of all you need to ...

I loved it, definitely one of the most emotionally stirring pieces I've ever read. Any and all suggestions I had seems to have been pointed out by others already. Do ...