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Re: Until(Part 1)
Thanks for the review! I needed that. Yes, the story could really use more elaboration, I see your point. On the mistakes, I'll correct them now... hehe.I'll get back to ...
May 25, 2009
Thanks for the review! I needed that. Yes, the story could really use more elaboration, I see your point. On the mistakes, I'll correct them now... hehe.I'll get back to ...
May 25, 2009