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Somehow mine scored Level 16 @ 29 comprehension. Pancakes. Here's the excerpt I used: For the next two weeks, I continued to cause distress to those whom I saw fit. ...

Sure, I'll review that tomorrow or this weekend. I'm a bit busy :s I just got a job and training starts soon!

lol xD Salut, bienvenue au forum. Je m'appelle Irène, j'ai 17 ans moi. Je vis au Québec mais je suis née en Ontario, c'est là ou j'ai appris le français. ...

Ben, pas très compliqué. Ton origine, c'est de l'Inde, mais tes parents sont venus en Angleterre où t'es née, puis toi, t'as demenagé en Nouvelle-Zéelande plus tard. Voilà xD En ...

I've completed both requests. Isha, grammar-wise, you're doing well. It's just your style that you need to work on; look at my reviews to see what I mean, or refer ...

“I have raised you since you were only ten years and I thought I had taught you well! Why do you choose to turn on me now?” Ten years... old? ...

“No, no, this will never do!” the seamstress, Annaliza , cried, throwing her hands up in disgust. I don't like how this is set up, but it's technically correct. In ...

Christmas, birthdays, Easter, they’re all celebrations (;) not funerals. Semi-colon misuse. That needs to be a dash, preferably. It was a warm Spring day in the beginning of June, and ...

I felt as though I was having some terrible nightmare (;) where my heart would come spilling out of my chest at any moment. Semi-colon misuse resulting in a fragment ...

Again, just posting what I noticed. “I’m so right, aren’t I?” He said, nodding at me. That "H" in "He" should be lower-case. “Is there something you’d like to share ...

I haven't rooted through the reviews above; I'll just post what I found. I didn’t know that she was my sister at first, I didn’t even know where she’d come ...

I will look at both of those :] [Edit] Finished your request, Skins. Not too shabby. Commas really are your issue, though. Be careful with semi-colons, too. A semi-colon is ...

lol no problem xD I'm just glad I found it o-o

Oh... Thanks :D >feels special because it was put in the "novel" section and not "short stories" xD

My topic was moved there, but I can't find the board 0.0 I want to see the board itself and click on it manually. What's the forum path there? I ...