Yuriiko

Can I be "Anastatia" as one of the villains? or not I will be glad to have Snow White. :D

Request before I'll starve to death! hee-hee...

Hello there! The sun blazed high in the sky, the waves crashed gently against the rocks and the sand turned black! nice description and a good start :) It was ...

Caroline: Edited - sorry for that, Apple- Humans? Why on earth do they still have to come here and ruin our life? My eyes scanned around the cold atmosphere. I ...

Hello there! This is very interesting. I could see the message behind the poem. First of all, your rhyming scheme was good, some parts though were kind of forced, just ...

Hello there! I totally like this! :D It wasn't expressive to the point that you are really crazy for one person but it really tells how much you cared for ...

Hello there! This is like a random short love story but I like it. :) Matt paced through the corridors of his mind. A good start in here. Maybe rephrase ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! :mrgreen: My questions for you are already answered... so... I'll just have to ask one. Question: How did you find out about YWS? My tip ...

Hello there, Jessy! It's so cute! It's like a "chibi" anime style. Hair: It looks flat on the head and I know you're trying to out-stand the yellow part of ...

Hello there! It's so beautiful! I love how the background effect was greyscale and the center focus was the crystal! It was really nice. :D Maybe a better angle could ...

Hello there, Ikafe! This lyric's totally emotional and deep for one whose heart became broken. I love the flow, the feelings going on and on. It slaps you, It kicks ...

Hello there! Here to review. :wink: Errors in red. Comments in blue. Wee woo wee woo wee woo P.J. ran around the living room making firetruck noises, drowning out the ...

Caroline: I felt the wet grassy field against my lump body. My eyes started to open slowly and noticed a small pink butterfly standing against the tip of my nose. ...

Hello there, Shubhi! Here to review as requested. Many reviews have pretty covered up all those mistakes already so I won't bother with it anymore. I'll just have to comment ...

Hello there! Here to review as requested. :mrgreen: Characters: I like how you portray your two main characters differently to each other. Also, it was kind of a biblical name. ...