Yuriiko

Hello there, Last! I may not give the best review but I hope I help something. :wink: 1st Photo: I really love it! I like the sunrise thing-y which totally ...

Hello there, KAH! Summer is sweet, You can be free. No more school, Only at the pool. I like the four starting lines but maybe you can try other words ...

Hello there, dark angel! Here to review. Ok, 'JackpotJohnson' said already the things that I was suposed to say here. :o Anyways, this is a good prologue. :) No grammar ...

Hello there, magic! I'm not really good at reviewing poetry but I'll try my best. :D I'm sweet I can even be used as a Valentine sweet Okay, this is ...

Hello there, Saga! Welcome to YWS! I'm glad you found this site!! Another member to have! :smt026 Questions: To know you better, if you don't mind. :wink: Who is your ...

For Caroline: Maybe a healing will do? ritual miracle? Like everyone will be in circles, saying unusual things to rid off the one who possessed Caroline... something like that. ;) ...

Hello there, dasiamari! Here to review. :D Errors/ Corrections in Red . Comments in Black . As I looked into her sky blue eyes and said the last words that ...

Hello there, Cindy! Welcome to YWS! How are you doing so far? :D Anyways, I have to agree with Kaedee. If I will be so harshly honest; your prologue's totally ...

Hello there, Writerchick! Welcome to YWS!! Another member and I'm really happy you found this site! :mrgreen: Visit every forums or sections here so you can be familiarize with anything. ...

Hello, this Yuriiko12345 ! You know, the girl whose username have five numbers with it. Really, this username has been my pen name for years now. :smt004 I wrote my ...

That's a good plan, kidashka! But if there's a party, who are invited? Boys only? Girls only? or both? Girls and Boys sounds good though but a dorm is too ...

Thomas Dunn: “You really do have a nice voice.” I complimented her. Her cheeks flushed pink a little. It was true, she sings like a humming bird or a bird ...

Caroline: “H-hello guys.” I said faintly. I could sense a strong aura inside me, as if something or someone was controlling my entire body. Their bewildered eyes on me, they ...

Your wish is my command! It will happen when the sun goes down tomorrow... :smt004

Hello there, Ofir! Here to review. Corrections/ Comments in blue This was no big deal, I tried to convince myself feebly. I'd opened this door a million times before. No ...