Yuriiko

Snow White: "Oh thank you very much!" She clasped her hand and a grateful smile appeared on her fair face. At least someone was helpful enough to make her feel ...

Hello there, Shubhi! Some critiques have pretty covered up all those corrections and mistakes, so I won't bother to it already. :wink: Things that confuses and destroys the flow of ...

honestly guys, it's hard for me to keep up, I just want to kill my character. XD any suggestions??

Banning us in a cute way. lol

Thomas: "Secret party, Oliver?"I questioned him with confused face. "Oh, don't worry. You're invited, Thomas." Oliver said with a smirked then continued minding whatever was his business. This couldn'

Just to let you guys know, I edited some parts of this story. :D

Can you please review my story? here's the link: thanks in advance!

Hello there, Skins! :) I agree with Classy, the family relations in the plot is quite confusing. Try to make this things clear by adding more emphasis on the relationships ...

Hello there, BlueRaspberry! First of all, your username's cute. :wink: I have to agree with 'Gen'. You just blandly tell us the plot without anything to describe and feel for ...

Hello there! I don't know why they call you Camel or some random silly names but I'll just call you Cammie, okay? hee-hee. Let us give that "camel" a twist. ...

Hello there, Skeen! I hope you're enjoying your stay here. I just want to know how did you find out about YWS? Anyways, you won't regret a hundred percent here. ...

can you review my story? here's the link: thanks in advance!

Hello there! Oohhh. That's really nice and cute! I totally love it. The reviews and short plot in there really made me laugh. It looked vibrant because of the colors ...

Hello there! I'm not good in reviewing poetry but I'll try my best to be of help. :wink: Okay, I like this though it was short but it was cute. ...

Snow White: "Hello?", Snow White's sweet voice echoed throughout the chilly atmosphere. She walked and searched for something or someone. No forest animals around her sight. She felt alone. Tears ...