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Re: Salve!
Hello there, Dante! Welcome to YWS! Weeeeee!!!! * pops confetti* How are you enjoying so far? Don't worry, English is my second language too, so I've committed a lot of ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Song
Hello there! Here to review as requested by Cap'n Classy. :wink: It made a piercing sound that sent a shiver down her spine, although rhythmically pounding like the beat of ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: So, How Do You Feel About Rings? Golden Ones?
Hello there, Kaedee! Here to you-know-it. :wink: Ka-dumb. Ka-dumb. Is this the sound the heart makes when it beats? Seriously, this quite confused me but I think it's the heart ...
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Nate!
Sorry, I can't afford a monkey gift for you, Nate. :D Happy Birthday!!!
May 29, 2010 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for giving good popular critiques.
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Cursed Atonement
Oh my... everyone's the villain? Hey, I like to take Ted Bundy as my character. I watched a movie of him.hee-hee! XD
May 29, 2010 -
Re: 6 is NEVER a crowd
Hello there! Here to review. “Brooklyn , could you please get up ? W e ' re going to be late for the cinemas, the boys are only going to ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Return
Hello there, Cafelene! First off, welomce to YWS! :wink: Skins pretty much covered up those mistakes that I've seen already. (Actually, I saw your story first without a review in ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: Stranded in School
Name: Samuel Young Age (11-18): 16 Gender: Male Personality: He’s kind of an inexplicable guy. His courteous manners and his descent actions cause girls to blush and go gaga for ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: High School DT
how will the faculty members find it out?
May 28, 2010 -
Re: There's No Need To Yell
Hello there! Characters: I like how you keep your MC fearless and strong. She isn't a whiner or doesn't ask for help. They are believable. The man actually scares me. ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: hello everyone
Hello there, maha! Welcome to YWS! First off, why won't you make your own thread in Welcome Area? Sorry but b this is Veeren's thread. :) Try to click "New ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Too Good For You, Too Good For Me
Hello there, Kaedee! Oh, this seems to be an expressive or a telling piece. Wow, there's a strong aura coming from your MC as I read this. hehe. I like ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Read it - you know you want to
Hello there! Welcome to YWS!! Hope you enjoy staying here. I remember you on chatroom before. :wink: Anyways, how are you doing? It's nice you're an open person. :wink: I ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: A little sun dont hurt nobody...
Hello there, Eraqio! Okay, I thought this was really good because this lyric opens the wonders of summer. :D (The heat or the sun, pools and beaches, etc.) It's like ...
May 28, 2010
