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Re: First Impression
That you're old. (No offense)
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Match Maker
Monkeys and YWSers ... Nate and King Kong
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: My First Impression of You
8D
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Your Miracle Girl (Was Never Yours)
Hello Iceprincess! I am here to review your piece, as one of the judges in Postsecret Contest. :wink: First of all, using the second POV is one of the factors ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Done at last! :D
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
Hello there, Sniks! :wink: Just by looking at those critiques before me, I don't really have that much to say. Yes, it's a tad cliche' but hey, I think you've ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Dear Mother-in-law-to-be[YURII CONTEST](currently editing)
Hello there Jashy! I'm here to review, as one of the judges for the contest. :3 I think I've probably said this to you, on your piece I've reviewed last. ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: The Tiger, The girl, The boy and The face
Amazing, dad.
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: First Impression
A user whose name is totally unique from others.
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: ..Magandang Araw!..
Oh my. You're from Philippines? That's great, me too! How did you find out about this site? So what genre do you usually read and who's your favorite author? I ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: First Impression
Someone who loves fish and loves to post on Randomness forum,
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Your request makes me so happy!
Done all!
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Nickname the user above you!
Lilo!
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Three Simple Rules
Hey there Lavender! My general impression of this story is that... I don't think this is even a story. I mean, the main character isn't yet developed very well or ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: the star crossed lovers
Hello there, Hope! Here to review. I definitely (and totally) agree with Ranger Hawk about your grammar, spellings, punctuations in dialogs and everything. However, everyone improves gradually and tha
Nov 16, 2010
