Yuriiko

Oh. Hello there, SilentRain! This is an interesting piece. The metaphors flowed very well with the emotions because I don't think they were worded awkwardly. Perhaps in the first stanza, ...

I know you know this. Nero!

Hello there! Here as requested. First of all, I find the piece confusing because it lacks depth and matter inconsistencies. If your aim is to make the poem and your ...

I forced FRED to leave YWS. >.

Hello Meepy. RAWR. Corrections in RED. She scatters seeds in the snow, Why no one has noticed this? It should be 'scatter', since the noun after it is plural. :3 ...

Banned because I am awesome. mawaahahhaah! XD

Hello there! Here as requested. Seeing that the previous critiques has taken care well of the nitpicks, corrections and stuffs, I don't think I still need to do a line-by-line ...

Hello there, Shubs! Here as promised. :3 The words slowly swooshed by me, me trying to grab them with all the force I could produce and they blowing past faster ...

Someone who likes storybooking.

Change starts in us.

Would you mid reviewing this for me, Yuri? It's a short story of mine. A little sketchy... but hey. xD Please and thank you! I'm done, Sniks. lol

Banned for thinking I have a Christmassed avatar. :P

ZOMG. I love you. Feed me lumpia and pansat and I will be yours forever.

Done, Sniks!

Hello Sniks! Here to review. :3 Good story you have here. The pace flow is just about right, so you should be happy for that. Grammatically speaking, I'm impressed with ...