Yuriiko

nice! great descriptions!

Thank you, NYCnightowl007. I very interested already in making another chapter and I Hope Kyle must be doing his confession to Lila there already... :D

I hope you would be interested in reading this guys. even if that this is long. :D I think and hope Kyle could have gotten the enough courage to tell ...

Wow. How you describe your poem is really nice. Descriptive yet, realistic. How you portray the big, wild ocean to an imperfect life. Deep. But it's really nice. :D Keep ...

Hey, there! You story's short but sweet. You do have the similar idea from the Romeo and Juliet. I thought, while reading, that it was a fairytale story for little ...

I think this is a good poem written by a creative mind of yours!! How you portray and describe your "reasons" are all nice. But kindly look at those repeated ...

I would go for it! :D

oh-oh... hahaha! it's so nice! You let your anger overcome in this poem! There's just this one thing that annoyed me... (don't worry... :D not literally) is how you rarely ...

For your first poem it's really nice!! Keep it up. but as what they've said you need to work on some of your lines there.... :D

wow!! I liked it! How you describe love is way creative!! When I first read it at first, I didn't get the poem but when I read and analyzed it... ...

I can feel the wind’s blowing all over the place Summer breeze and sunny sunshine, I see Birds singing sweet and flowers dancing I know this place is calm and ...

cute and romantic!! keep it up! loved it and congratulations for having this as a featured work!! :D

Awww. It was a wonderful poem. Short but sweet and kind of... dark. How you portray the lovers loving each other just for an act to hating each other deeply ...

Hello, writers!! I've been submitting my pieces or works for the best 1 month and 2 weeks already and my major problem is... GRAMMAR!! As you can see, mostly of ...

Wow... i really salute you for that wonderful work of yours. I just have received your comment on one of my piece.. and we have the same concept of story.... ...