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Re: Kyle & Lila: Chapter 2
To say those three special words to her is a hard thing to do for me… I think. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ “Hello sweetie! Hello, Kyl
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Re: Looking up at the Starry Sky
Looking Up at the Starry Sky I felt the cold wind and the smell of fresh air. The birds circling around the dark blue sky, cold lies as it filled ...
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Re: Colors
wow.. i like the concept of the poem. How you state the colors to small meaning to big. Keep it up and as you can see,you could go to deeper ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: A Billet-doux
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Re: Outspoken Rain
Nice one. Will Lily Die?? And does Abigail have something like feelings for Andrew?? I liked the story which includes the characters, different perspectives, how you describe their feelings towards ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
ahahahah! so funny! LOL.
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Euthanasia: Yes or No??
Hey, everyone. I've been thinking for a while now that suicide is an illegal act and an intentional sin against the Almighty... but have you heard of "Euthanasia" ?? Euthanasia ...
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Re: The Way You Look At Me..
I liked how you kept your poem simple but sweet. But there's just one problem in you poem and it is how you rhyme them. For the first stanza it's ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Abortions? Yay or Nay?
There are just few situations wherein abortion should take place if it calls out the life between the mother and the baby. It actually depends on the situation mostly on ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: At the beach.
I loved the first picture. You pictured the ocean reflecting the color faded of the sky. I like the fading blue to white of the sky. It's really nice. As ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Alabaster Smile
First of all, welcome to YWS, mary! Hope you enjoy being an aspiring writer.hehe. :D If this is your first piece- I would like to say that you did a ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: A Love Letter.
hello there! Congratulations for being featured!! I loved how you portray the man's love to his friend that's why I quoted it.. I know you put friends before boyfriends. That, ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
the best-selling novel. "DEAR JOHN" it's better actually than the movie. It's more interesting and informative about the love between two persons falling in love than of the book.. wahahahah! ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Need help with a question! Please! Calling all Women!
awww.. the poem "thingy" is okay but you might freaked out the girl. you know, it's creepy for us to unexpectedly find a poem in our bag. wahahaha!
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Stay Forever [Chapter One]
oh.. you left it hanging!! BTW, the story's cute and romantics! weee! interesting!!
Apr 12, 2010
