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Re: Come With Me
Thanks for that, Brainy. I fixed those two things already. Thanks again.
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Butterfly Tiger
This would be my first submitted drawing. I tried to copy the original picture from a tattoo book but this is just it. My dad's a tattoo artist, that's why. ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Sasuke (anime)
Hello there! First, I would like to say that you have a nice drawing there! Second, I had a crush on Sasuke of Naruto before! :smt001 (I am still an ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: When I Dream
The only thing that makes this disturbing for me is the misspelled word: "Ainlessly", it should have been "Aimlessly". This a a 3-stanza poem, short but nice, in a way ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Why do we love?
ahhaha. both the couples are very funny. made me laugh! :D
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Come With Me
Hey everyone. This is my first "finished" lyric. One afternoon, something made me write this song. Hope you like it guys! :D Hoping for your feedbacks, comments, etc. :wink: Come ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Wire Hearts and Paper Dreams (1)
Hey! I liked it! :D That's all I can say...hehehe.
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Not you
It was a beautiful morning the sun was covered by the clouds, up setting I looked at a pile of frames Not wanting to remember your name Cold air, as ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: My First Photos! :}
hey there! I really salute you for your wonderful talent in Photography and it's nice how you took picturesque places which includes nature , of course! but as you know ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance (fixed)
thank you guys for all of your reviews.. it really helped me a lot. i edited some, like those tenses and switched to past tenses as what "Collision" had stated ...
Apr 16, 2010 -
Re: Last Trip
You actually made a good start. I like the concept of your poem. I like how you describe the situations and how you felt the experience in there. And I ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: The Last Dance (fixed)
This is actually a sad love story. Hope you guys like it! :o I already fixed out those mistakes, guys but I could still sense and I'm 88.75% sure that ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: My Back Yard
is that really your backyard? wow. nice! it's like a forest! kidding. I really like the sun's ray giving light to your backyard but too much brightness can fade the ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: When we Met
ahahah! nice! and I like the second paragraph wherein the guy just suddenly out-of-nowhere appeared to her! really good and I can't find a single mistake to it... hmmm?? it's ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: 1 Random Question...pls.answer.. :D
THANK YOU< PEOPLE!!!! esp. bro NATE and everyone!!
Apr 14, 2010
