Yuriiko

Hello Durrie! You actually have a talented artistic skills! Loved the drawing and the shading part. Good eyes and mouth. The nose is kind of... well, it looks flat and ...

Hello there! This is actually a good drawing. Loved the shading part. There are things that I just noticed. The feet are not somewhat equal, especially the nail part. The ...

Hello there! Hey, I could see that your lyric is all about a person who loves 2 persons but she can't decide well 'cause she really love both of the.... ...

Hey everyone. This is a chibi (a Japanese word that means "small person" or a small version of an anime character. Hope you guys like it. I know... the girl ...

hey there, LittlePet! I liked your poem. The rhyming's good and the concept of "Escape" was really obvious to the fact that it was the "emotion" flowing throughout the poem. ...

hello there! I liked your lyrics because you showed your feelings and emotions to it. But one thing that distracted me while I was looking down at your lyrics is ...

Hello crescent! I liked your story. It was short but sweet. For me, the rose actually made sense in the story. It was nice how you symbolizes the rose and ...

Hey there!! I loved the flow of your poem, the beginning till the end. I also liked you poem because you ryhmed well and nice. Loved it how you describe ...

At first, just by looking at your title I remembered the song called "Who Am I?". Anyways... Hello there! Your starting point was good but I was lost at the ...

hahahha! That was epic. You just made my day. I tried singing it once and it was really funny but just one thing, sometimes the lyrics doesn't rhyme with the ...

Hello there! I love your work! It got me thrilled from the beginning until the end. :wink: You have some talent you know. You described well the atmosphere and the ...

This is a cool drawing! I like how your character is sitting upright the guns look awesome... Nice! It would be better if you add some colors or did you ...

Hello there and Welcome to YWS! Is this your first submitted work? Well, as what others have stated above, your story didn't fit well with the title. I like the ...

hello there, Blue! Your poem's short and you really have to make it long because it seems that you left it hanging! :o In that little burst little burst of ...

hey, Kaila! I would really appreciate it very much for your review or feedbacks, comments, etc. Title: The Last dance Genre: Romantic Short Stories Link: Thank you and hoping! Peace ...