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Re: Being the Best Member You Can Be
wow. That's cool. thanks for this.
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Sunrise at the beach
Hello there! Oooohhh... You're one talented guy.Loved those photographs, I'm referring to the recent pictures you've posted. Really liked how you took those clouds and the sun. :D Anyway, the ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Your Career
I want to be a writer... or a journalist from a magazine. :D
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Jodi Picoult???
All I know is that I know her. I sometimes ignore her books when I visit our local bookstore but I'll try reading some of her books. XD
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Your Voice
I sat on a rusty bench I felt the warm breeze and the blazing sun I took a fresh air through my nose And I heard the children’s laughing, Sound ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Eating Worms
Hello there, Sunstar! I really liked it. The concept and the idea of your poem was totally unique. There are just some things that made me disturbed. One, rhyme scheme. ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Calansera
Hello there! I'm just here to comment on you "Calansera". First of all, I like her body XD. Love the hands. It would have been better if you show her ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Mirror
Hello there and Welcome to YWS! That's for sure short but cute. I like the concept and the idea of your poem. Remember, you need to always capitalize "I". That's ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Sunrise at the beach
Hello there and Welcome to YWS! See? Congratulations for posting your photos here. The pictures you have taken are very nice and quite picturesque. It's good how you choose the ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Only Hope
Only hope I have to say it now… I won’t wait for another day. “Alex...” I called out his name softly, almost a whisper. It was the start of the ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Kurenai
Hello there! The only thing that I've noticed is that the girl looks so sad. You probably need to fix that out. Peace out!
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: "You're a First Rate Geek" (You Belong With Me PARODY) Edit
Lol. I love Taylor Swift songs. but this just made my day :D. Problem: formatting.
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: im not so sure anymore.
Hello there, Chaos! :) Honestly, your story's quite uninteresting especially on the beginning. You need to put a good start so that you could catch the attention of the readers. ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Brightness
Hello there, knight! I like how you begin with your first line, it's interesting. It would automatically catch the reader's attention. The flow of the poem and the rhyme scheme ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Pebbles (Edit)
Hello there, hero! First of all, this lyric was good and interesting to accompany with an acoustic guitar. The idea was quite enjoyable and every line connects to each other. ...
Apr 25, 2010
