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Re: Hi, I'm new here.
Hello there, Blair! Just reading your name, causes me to remember the popular novel series tittled "Gossip Girl". hehe. Anyways, welcome to YWS. "Thingletoodle"- really? I hope you enjoy being ...
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Re: Peanut Butter Banana Sandwiches
Hello there, Scarlette! Your story was quite kind of funny actually. Derrick and his friends thought that Amber got PMS.lol. Also, I liked your unique way of titling the story. ...
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Re: Stain on the Sidewalk *Re-edited!!*
Hello there, Isha! I liked your story. It was sad, but really good. Liked the good start of your story. One thing that really made me confused was when Mark ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: 5 Tips for Realistic Characters
Thanks for posting this. Really helped me a lot esp. the last tip! :D
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Hey!
Hello there! Welcome to YWS, Jolene. Hope you'll like your stay here. It would be better if you talked more about yourself and the kind of genres you write. I ...
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hello there! Can you review mine too? Title: Only Hope Genre: Romantic Short Story Link: Thank you!
May 1, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
Hello there! The poem depicted the feelings and the thoughts of the narrator here. I too agree with Snoink. You only describe the rush of emotions throughout the poem without ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Art Dump
Hello there!! Love those drawings! You're really talented. Loved the shading part esp. on the first one, the fur thing-y. It really looks very realistic and the artworks after the ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Fashion Designing by ME!
Hello there! I loved your sketches! I really liked the first and the third drawn dress! I liked the color and the floral design. But as with the second, it ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: FREAKY SPAGHETTI
Hello there, Snoink! Totally awesome and funny! The plot's so unique and the characters are so hilarious! You totally made my day! BETH Officially, this “town” is a city. So ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: - Ryuzaki -
Hello there! Oooo...L! The character from Death note! I like this. But as what Areida said, I too noticed his chin, it's not that equal. Also with the eyes, too ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Peaceful, At Last
Hello there! I like it. As what "Dante92" said, I too feel calm and at peace when I began reading this. I like the first stanza until the last one. ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Happy Endings for Sale
I saw into your face looking tired Heartbroken, is it? I know it’s hard to accept, The reality somehow You felt helpless And no one seemed to care He didn’t ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Sketch of a guy ^_^
Hello there, Skins! I would like to say that your drawing's so awesome. I like the side-view look of the boy. I also like the shading part especially on the ...
Apr 30, 2010 -
Re: Angelic Heart
Hello there, Zebra! This art is a colorful one. Like the "halo" above the heart and the background too! One thing that I would like to say for the mistaken ...
Apr 30, 2010
