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Re: Strange Sound (Prologue)
Psst! Frightened, I jumped a little from my bed. I’ve been hearing that same sound since that cold Friday night. I gripped the pillow with my hands, my fingers buried ...
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Re: Your Hygiene (A Jump then Fall Parody)
Hello there, Forest! Oooo... I love all T-Swift's songs by the way! That was funny! :lol: Anyway, when you make a parody please be sure to have the proper beat ...
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Re: Nine Eleven revised
Hello there, Sarebear! I find this interesting and a touching poem. I liked the flow of this poem especially from the first stanza. The way you portrayed those glass shattering ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Left Wing
oh-oh. thanks for that, fight! I'll edit that.
May 7, 2010 -
Re: random absurd story
Hello there! First of all, this is really an "absurd" story(really similar to your title), made me laugh out of its funny plot. :lol: However, I could see a lot ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Left Wing
Looking at your teary eyes, Uncover the reason for it Hatred and all evil lies, Not a cause for you to quit Staring at your feeble wing Sunlight, shimmering down ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Cliches in Poetry
thanks!
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
delicious
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Get To You (SF's C)
Song: Get to You by James Morrison. Honestly, I was not fully-inspired after listening to the song for a few times already. Maybe, because this wasn't my kind of song, ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: O.O <-new!
Hello there, Firefly! I was thinking of the song called "Fireflies" by Owl City rather than a TV show when I read first your name! :smt004 Anyways, welcome to YWS! ...
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Re: The New Girl In Town
Hello there! Welcome to YWS, Chelsea or do you want to be called "The Ease Dropper" I suppose? :mrgreen: Also, I want to know more about you so (if you ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Michael
Hello there, Arah! An interesting poem to read. I am a mermaid kicking The surface I liked this line. It's a good way of having a metaphoric line. :wink: Did ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Penetrating the Pale Horse (1)
Hello there, Classy! I totally love your story. Though it didn't bring me to tears but it was kind of a sad touching story :smt022 . I love how you ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Silent Screams
Hello there, Allmixedup! I liked this. The way you expressed "Silent scream" is very unique and kind of showing the dark side and slightly emotional. I'm thinking this could be ...
May 4, 2010 -
Re: I am not a duck
Hello there, Poet! This is an interesting piece and I must say I really liked this. :smt003 At first, I didn't get this poem because there were some words or ...
May 4, 2010
