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It's not what you think. This is totally not a good doggie but a scary bulldog. hee-hee. :mrgreen: Hope you like it guys, even though the shading isn't really good.

I'm done with the reviews, Luvzi and Laura! :D

Hello there! Here as requested. :wink: An interesting and kind-of-a twist story of Grimm's story Hansel and Gretel! hehe. :mrgreen: I know you want this story to be a fairy-tale ...

Hello there, Laura! Here as requested. Suggestions in blue Errors in red Treading softly, treading lightly Treading is a good pick for a word but not really for the first ...

hello guys! Thanks for those requests. Give me time to review those, okay? Shubhi- The review's done though I went for the prologue first 'cause so that it would be ...

Hello there, Shubhi! Here as requested. I might give a small nitpick 'cause I've seen a lot of reviews which pretty covered up all those mistakes.[/quote] “I should have tied ...

hello there! I really like this. It's like the poem itself is growing more of emotions as I read the more and more. It's kind of emotional. It had a ...

Hello there, JP! First of all, welcome to YWS! You love Fantasy, don't you? Well, submit your works under Fantasy Fiction. Also, try to visit other threads and section, esp. ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I was really glad you stated the word "debate" :D . Please don't hesitate to be a member of Debate Group here. You can find ...

Hello everyone! I'm Yuri and I will review for food, specifically pizza! Boy do I have like the most spontaneous childlike WRRF title thread ever. It vomits rainbows and unicorns.

Hello there! This is an interesting lyric though you should rate this 12+ or 16+ for the some mild languages. :wink: Aside from that, it was emotional and expressive to ...

Hello there! This is so funny 'cause you really made me laugh esp. on the last part. :mrgreen: I love how you portray the two MCs here because you seemed ...

Hello there! This poem's good and interesting. It's an emotional piece. It had a smooth flow and the idea of this is quite understandable. Sometimes , life hands you things ...

Hey there! I totally agree with Kyllorac. :wink: It was too cliche' and the idea itself wasn't really interesting. Maybe try to use some figures of speech like similes, metaphors, ...

Hello there, Skutter! So I see, you drew one of favorite anime Naruto character here, Kakashi!!(I so like him, btw :mrgreen: . ) Anyways, I'm here to give some comments ...