YoungNate8

No complaints very good nothing bad about it :) :)

I posted the first chapter of my new Fantasy book Fallen Civilization it mixes action and made junk I made up my self every thing in this first chapter is ...

Its long but I assure you its worth it I am trying to do every thing possible to make it an enjoy able Novel

All reviews and comments are appreciated. Also the Metallica song Nothing else matters is mentioned in this so if you have never heard it go check it out on Youtube ...

I like it I have decided to start reading some of these longer pieces of work because a lot of them are really good like this one. This piece of ...

When you are done with this novella seek out a publisher this IS bookstore worthy

okay first DONT TAKE A BREAK THIS IS REALLY REALLY INTERESTING I'M ONE OF THOSE PEOPLE THAT TAKE INTEREST IN ALMOST ANYTHING. This is a really interesting story. I dont ...

Okay this is funny and interesting small issues though I listed them below 1- TOOOO long I considered NOT reading it when I saw the length but I thought okay ...

I liked the first chapter and I like this chapter. The first chapter was funny and interesting. This chapter was funny interesting just it lacked details and Connor lacked personality ...

Everybody wants to start off good and have their writing stay good Storm bringer started off good. Cora the humorous killing character that you started the story was clearly a ...

Hello I working on a book called "fallen civilization" its about two teens (one boy one girl) they are 16 a couple and they find out at a school dance ...

Chapter 1 Portal to a second world Tom wasn't totally sure where he was just where ever it was something kept going THUMP..THUMP..THUMP.....and so on. He kept his eyes closed ...