Yatta!

“NO!” She shook the mouse on her computer and shied away when the blinding white background Uh, what? I didn't get that. "when the blinding white background"...what? I liked it ...

Ooooo. I like it. I mean, well. At first i somehow thought she was disfigured...you know? Is she? Ah, I want to know more. If my questions aren't answered I'll ...

Spare Change The penny beneath the old battered sofa had lost its shine. No longer the bright reddish gold of its youth; it was a dull brown and stained green ...

You said critique it, so that's what I am going to do... I cry in the dark so you can't see the constant tears, Dress up in black to help ...

Uh...umm... Okay, so it's a girl who digs her best friend and sets him up with another girl and he comes back because he really loves her. Very nicely written, ...

I liked it, but I have some criticism. So, following my Health Teacher's "Yes-No-Yes" technique for assertiveness...HERE....I...GO! Yes: Well, personally, I liked it. It is a nice idea. I can ...

UH, HELLO JACK! and EVERYONE ELSE!

HELLO! HOW ARE YOU? I'M GOOD! I CAN'T WAIT FOR SOME CREATIVE CONSTRUCTIVE UH "CORRECTIONS", FOR LACK OF A BETTER WORD! Well, first of all, a little about myself. I'm ...