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guinea pigs.....why are they called that? They're rodents right?

Well, I think I got the meaning of the poem. Lots of imagery, lots of different images, but they all come about under a unifying theme. I am guess your ...

Down in the South, it’s known for getting hot. But on that faithful summer when I felt all things in my life were changing, when I finally felt the tug ...

The first stanza is unneeded and purely there for aesthetic reasons, I think. Garnishes should only be used in sweets and flower decorations, get rid of it. The second stanza ...

Oh, and one last thing. If you are interested in reading more and expanding your arsenal of literary techniques, don't be afraid to PM me. I'll be more than happy ...

"The warmth of the sun on his neck woke Mark up in the morning. " Is an awkward sentence, try "In the morning, Mark woke up to the warmth of ...

Fabulous. I wish people would come to look at your poem and see how lovely TRANSITION is in poetry. It's really hard to capture such flow, especially in a long ...

My asperations and creations all intwined Coloured with my imagination but, gave out false information (Comment: This line bares no impression. It shouldn't be here because it doesn't even support ...

SHUFFLE? Animal's don't shuffle? Animals are animals! Humans shuffle. Animals DO NOT shuffle. Do you know what shuffling is? Shuffle (v) with object: 1. to move (one's feet) along the ...

RE: "I could really use some help with this! Do the images work? Does it make sense to anyone but myself? Is the ending strong enough? Please review! Thanks guys!" ...

Hmm, well it's a nice romance, don't get me wrong, but your interpretation of elves is drastically close to Stephenie Meyer's interpretation of careful to stay true to your craft. ...

Hmm. I don't really have anything to edit content wise. It's obviously just a little snap shot. I don't wanna spoil it and cover it with red ink, do i? ...

Mmmm.....Alright. I didn't like it. I liked the idea, and I liked the fact that as a fan of John Lennon, you were still able to paint Chapman in a ...

Very nice, I'm happy you put "most" this time, even though 99.9 DNA is absolutely correct, dear. Nevertheless, I really like the continuation. Penny seems just as unique as Lorraine ...

Is there a reason why you say "Charlotte" excessively in the first paragraph? It was a bit bothersome. Correction, it's not the "Charlotte"s really, it's just seeing "Ch"s together. It ...