Yahowshuwa

Hey Jack, thanks for the review, :). The opening scene struck me with a number of common fantasy tropes: meeting in a tavern, wearing a leather jerkin, pickpocketing. Not that ...

Hey Yahowshuwa, I'd like to formally welcome you to YWS! You can call me Stella or any variation thereupon, and I will be your reviewer today. Firstly, I see your ...

Thanks again for the detailed reply, Bickazer . And there's no need to worry about ripping into the story. If I didn't want honest reviews I wouldn't post something like ...

Hey both, thanks for the words. Only a couple of friends have read this so it's really nice to get a non-biased review. To be honest, it read like a ...