Yahowshuwa

Hey Yahowshuwa, I'd like to formally welcome you to YWS! You can call me Stella or any variation thereupon, and I will be your reviewer today. Firstly, I see your ...

Thanks again for the detailed reply, Bickazer . And there's no need to worry about ripping into the story. If I didn't want honest reviews I wouldn't post something like ...

Hey all, thanks for the warm welcome. I've already posted the first chapter of my novel for any interested. It's here. Heya Josh. I love this name. :smt002 Welcome to ...

Hey both, thanks for the words. Only a couple of friends have read this so it's really nice to get a non-biased review. To be honest, it read like a ...

This is now the 4th draft on the first chapter of my novel based on the helpful tips and critisms so far. Thanks all and enjoy. ------------------------------------------------------------------------

My name is Josh, I live in the south of England. I'm a avid reader of mostly high fantasy and some sci-fi novels; I own about two hundred books now ...