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YTguy97

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: In the Land of Smoke and Haze

    Oh, I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond. I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate all feedback, and it's nice to see how I can impact other people. I ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Just Talk

    It's always nice to see someone attempt writing that's different than most. As others have said, this style leaves more open to interpretation, and you've done well in leaving a ...

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: In the Land of Smoke and Haze

    Thank you very much! It's nice to be appreciated. I'll keep your comments in mind when I look over the story. In regards to the ellipses issue, I feel that ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Overdose

    What a sad story... You've done well in establishing the melancholy.

    Feb 25, 2014


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