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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Running From Myself

    This was a good piece your first paragraphs were well written and easy to follow. However towards the middle your paragraphs became a little confusing. I don't know of anything ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: War Sucks

    Swords clashed in the distance... I charged forward towards a knight who cut down three of my allies. I raised my blade to cut him down when another sword caught ...

    Apr 11, 2011


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality