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Thanks to all that helped with this. As I must turn it in Monday to be sent in Tuesday, I am taking it down, If anyone wants to read the ...

Thank you!!!

Oh... I have to sub mit it to get credit in my english class... Should I possibly delete it?

Very very lovely! Good job!! :D

I think that people that say Merry Christmas are nice holiday-y people. Not dumb. And PARAGRAPHS! XD Have fun with the complainers. Xy

Thanks all for the reviews!!

I'm redoing it a bit, with a better prologue. Will you reread that? Its going to be rather different but the actual chapter one will start the same.

Haha well I didn't realize. i wrote to a decent stopping point. XD

This is SO cool! I really really like where youre going with it! One thing you may want to do is vary your sentence structure a bit, but other than ...