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teehee i know who this is about!!!!! :D lol but anyway i love it! i know you dont like it that much, but i love it! its beautiful!!! a wonderful ...

*claps* VERY beautiful! i find NOTHING wrong with this poem!! keep writing! and merry christmas/happy holidays :D

-Audy thanks! I kind of suck at puncuation in poems, lol. so thanks again! i really apreciate your input audy! -Fallenangel27 i also appreciate yours A.F (btw dont forget, i ...

just to warn everyone, im not sure if this islyric poetry or not, so im sorry if i'm wrong. Also i have a problem with puncuation in poems, so please ...

over all i love the concept and the poem itself. it has a powerful image and has powerful emotion. one thing i would work on are these lines; A whispered ...

very beautiful! i love how it was full of emotion AND it flowed well. i also have to agree with you. i like how it is. i don't think you ...

yay!!! i like it M.L!!! (oh btw gimme a nickname for u so i know wat to call you and youll know its me) anyway the only thing i think ...

No offense to Juniper, but i disagree completely on the last part. Don't listen to the last bit, Rae. Love is infinity. Never can the topic love be so common ...

A hope. A wish Mind taking flight Horror. Love dreams show you delight Yet with a flick of the eyes It all dissapears As the reality sinks in You burst ...

Wow. This is very emotional. I love how you kept on having the little boy relate to his father, for that's what many young boys do. Alltogether very well written. ...

Only love and despair are eternal. Yet, with no despair can there be love? With no love can there be despair? When you love, can't you still feel the despair ...