XxxcagedheartxxX

Why count the hours, the minutes? Moments, (Sometimes blurry, Sometimes pure) Consume your life at most. Time is merely a number Ticking away from grasp; The moments last. That is ...

hey doll! (lol u use tht all the timeXD) any way i love the feeling these lyrics give off im wondering......(you dont have to tell me on your post) but ...

Like Romeo and Juliet, our love is forbidden So we’ll have to keep it secret, we’ll have to keep it hidden I wish it was painless, for both you and ...

thnx for all the replies THe universe!!! i really appreciate feed back :) im also glad you like my poetry :D thnx again -cagedheart♥

The thought of beauty is suicide. It rips at your mind to be more than just that girl .Where everyone will worship the ground you walk. Yet, in doing so, ...

Jealousy of beauty is a pain like no other. Where it strikes your heart and forever corrupts your mind until you finally adjust to a dark feeling; that you'll never ...

i like it, a lot actually! i love how the main character is talking to the "audience". also how its very suspenseful! the only thing i think you should fix ...

thanks a lot Mackenzie, much appreciated. :D I'm a little loss on what to rate it though.....because there's no inappropriate parts, but it does talk about war...... i don't know ...

thank you all for reviewing....if i believe it is nessacary i'll make changes. as for my theme. yes it is in fact one theme. i hate explaining poetry, but i ...

(for curious people chapter one is split for there are going to be different pints of views♥thnx for reading!)(also for THIS part its E but idk for other chapters lol) ...

i am surprised that this peom is your first! you had put so much emotion into this piece. yet i am confused. i get the topic, though with each stanza, ...

i really like this! the only things wrong are some grammar/spelling errors. other than that i really enjoyed reading this. you put a lot of emotion into it. Keep writing! ...

My heart's repairing, piece by piece, with you in my life, I am complete. A sweet fairytale, you seem to be, a wish you are, in my vivid dreams. Never ...

Hey, Mo! ok i just have to say i LOVE this peom! the theme is used a lot, yet the way you described it made me keep on reading. :D ...

i really really love this!!!! just to show my first wasnt the best but oh well XD also theres one thing......tghe very ending...... the speaker says "i am dead" this ...