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Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter One
I'm sorry, I really am not trying to sound mean, but what other words would I use to insult a vampire if not "leech" and "bloodsucker"? Yes, I realize that ...
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Re: Tell us the last thing you said in your mind (thoughts)
I going to kill her. I mean, seriously. How the hell did she manage to do this to my room? I know it looked bad before but.. Come on!
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Re: Your Brain
No he doesn't need to do any editing! Don't you get it? The mistakes are part of the poem. You can still read it and understand it even though its ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter One
Thank you for your help. Seriously, I always miss this type of stuff when I go back and edit. Also there is more on her brother in the next chapter...
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Re: What Would You Say
Okay, let me be honest and rant a little. When I came to this line, I really started to cry. It's just the connectivity between this line and the lines ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: A Forbidden Love: Chapter One
Chapter 1 "Sam? Yoo-hoo, earth to Samantha. Are you even listening to me? Of course you're not, you never listen," Alex mumbled. "I love you and now I am going ...
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Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Umm... I'm thinking kind of short, dark brown hair, and green eyes. Now watch me be completely wrong XP
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Re: Removed #2
This is a very sad but sweet poem. There were a few spots where you seemed to change tense or the rhyming became a little forced, but over all I ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Land of the dead.
Trembling, I stand at the castle door. I think of my past, my eyes fill with gore. I'm not sure I understand how your eyes could be filled with gore. ...
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Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
I think I'll say 7/10 because I don't like Shania Twain and New Soul is just okay. Not the best song in the world. But the others are pretty good. ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: A Forbidden Love: Preface
Hey! I would just like to start by saying you have a very strongly written piece on your hands! Onto the nit-piks. My comments are in italics and my fixes ...
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Re: A Forbidden Love: Preface
Preface No! No! NO! My legs felt as heavy as lead as I stumbled before falling to my knees, and clutching my stomach. Help! Please someone help! Sweat beaded my ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: The Happy
Haha, I really liked it. It was funny, dark, and twisted.
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: What Would You Say
What would you say Daddy, what would you say if I went away? Mommy, would you cry if died? God came to me today, He said it was time to ...
Mar 3, 2009