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Haha thanks everyone. This really shows that a 15 year old shouldn't post a story she wrote when she was only 11 without proofreading. lol. Thanks everyone. I'll work on ...

Welcome. You're really good. I wish I could write similar to the ability you have. Lol

Time to wake up, Buttercup. The anaesthetic should of long worn of by now I think thats what u said. of=off

First paragraph I noticed my throat was soar, as if I had woken up from a wild party. Soar=Sore

This is a really good story.... But 'sore' is spelt like that. LoL. I loved it. I was caught right away... And it has a great plot. Crazy kidnapper out ...

I liked your story. You should add the bac story though. Other than that it's really good. Just a few minor errors. But you're taking care o that (=