XxUndefinedxX

This was fantastic. I could literally feel the tension in the story. I've noticed some fragments but other than that it was great. I hope this will help! :)

Wow. That's all I could say. This story is really good so far! :D I can't wait to read more!

Thanks everybody for your fantastic reviews! Yes I know I really need some work on this but I will get it soon! Thank you again! I will make a new ...

Wow this was a really cute love story. There is nothing that would've made that better. :)