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Re: An odd poem for a friend :]
This is for my friend Arqelys :] It's your xmas present since i didn't buy you anythinq. :] I don't know what to write. A poem? A ode? A stort ...
Dec 25, 2009 -
Re: Emotionally Dead
I wear a fake smile, surely fools you. I can't mend this broken heart you left. You killed me, killed me to death. I can't think. I can't breathe. I'm ...
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: Where poets find their peace
Wow ! Its an amazing poem ! Keep it up :]
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Waiting
My memory is stained with your memories, Your blood, Your Tears of all your past. I may didn't exist then, But now you became a part of me. Because when ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Done faking whats not there
VERY NICE ! The title just pulled me in ! I can connect to it a lot :]. Keep it up
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: 8 Billion to One
Thank You :] I made some changes :]
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: 8 Billion to One
I watch the world around me, Random people of different ages, races and complexions. Handsome and Ugly. Sweet and Mean. Odd or Normal. Names unique and familiar. Married, Taken Or ...
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: FireFlies
OMG ! That was not a bad story! It kept me entertain. Keep it up :]
Nov 13, 2009 -
Re: Photography by me
These picture were taken very clearly & prefect in my eyes. The image is clear & is interesting. I love the first picture. It's like a mystery to me & ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: lies start
Grammar Error : ware = where :]
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Time For A Change
Is it possible, for things to change? Not talking about the world, Their change is soon to come. I'm speaking of us, when it existed. I'm not happy about it, ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Alone
This poem was written in a unique way. It's short of a form of a sonnent & also explaining the previous line into one word. I like how it shows ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: A Cutter's Lullaby
This poem is excellect. It captures the exact view of cutter because, well, I was one. It shows the emotions of a cutter & what they commonly use to cut, ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Mistake (rated R)
Wow, this is such a good poem. It's seems like a rap in other's eyes but in yours it's a poem & i'll agree with you. You express emotion in ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: Dead Memories
They're all i have, All I need. It's not much, But I don't mind the pain & grief. They seem like nothing, Yet their the world to me. I keep ...
Sep 5, 2009
