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"wat really ir'tates meh is when yo car-kers spake lyk deees." Okay, not that bad. But you know what I mean. I understand it's stylistic and phonetically true to the ...

Part two of book one posted before part one of book one! The book seems to warm up right about here; or, more precisely, towards the end of here. Reading ...

(Post) Sure thing. PM me when you put it up (or post a response here)! Note: your part two link is broken.

:lol: What about whomever Alex is addressing in the first-person section? Like when he says "Oh, and Hi. I’m Alex. Nice to meet you" -- who is he speaking to, ...

Most of the same problems as before. Just move the plot a bit faster and fix those two main flaws and you're all good :D

Hi Karsten! Glad you enjoyed it! ...that I think you’re struggling to convey all the necessary information in a convincing way... Exactly! My very first readers said the same thing! ...

Well, that was certainly a breath of fresh air. With each chapter comes a new level of intensity and fascination. Interesting. So far your plot is advancing (albeit slowly, especially ...

I updated the first chapter with most of your revisions. Thanks. I'm still working on yours though :wink:

I see your point there, I'll make those edits when I get back. Thanks!

Ep stands for Epilogue, by the way. This is part two of two equally short parts. This is the preview of my Book Two_ The Apostles for my Novel Series ...

Ep stands for Epilogue, by the way. This is part one of two equally short parts. This is the preview of my Book Two_ The Apostles for my Novel Series ...

Just finished my first novel, right before school starts back up! Woo! :smt005 Since I'ma be a senior (and picked all simple classes) I'll be takin' it easy with an ...

Ello! If you feel like it, I've got something that might relieve your boredom for a day or two :P It's a novel; urban action/adventure fantasy, if that's your thing. ...

Hello fellow new person :lol: I flew by and saw you'd go for some Action/Adventure fiction in the form of a novel. I've got just the sort of novel! I'd ...

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