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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (1)
Wow, if I was in that situation, I'd panic! Excellent job writing how the main character feels, and how awkward it must be for her. Although three seems kind of ...
Jul 24, 2008 -
Re: Regen: Chapter 0.5
Nice so far, good dialogue and some well nice details. This could be a personal nitpick, though, but I feel that some of the sentences could be combined to make ...
Jul 24, 2008