XtremeDino

Thanks. I might change the name of the planet, that's easy to do, just use the "Find/Replace" feature! :lol: I'm glad you liked it.

This is the start of my trilogy, and it was probably the most fun I've ever had in writing. It took a lot of guts to post it here to ...

Wow, if I was in that situation, I'd panic! Excellent job writing how the main character feels, and how awkward it must be for her. Although three seems kind of ...

Nice so far, good dialogue and some well nice details. This could be a personal nitpick, though, but I feel that some of the sentences could be combined to make ...

It took seven years and three rewrites to actually complete it! It's a long story, I started this one draft in 2004 just for fun, then I decided I could ...

The books were horrible, the only reason they became such huge hits was because 1) they have dragons on the cover, and 2) most of the audience is blinded by ...

Well, I was trying to find a way to get a publisher for my trilogy, but then I decided that perhaps I should join a writing community or something that ...

My writing tip is about dialogue. If you feel iffy about something your character said, say it out loud, acting like you're in the situation. If it doesn't sound natural, ...

Yeah, I read that. I tried to brush up on the rules before I attempted to do anything. Thanks for welcoming me! :D

Well, I just thought I'd introduce myself. I've been writing for nearly all my life, have finished a trilogy with a word count of 410,000 words total, and am hoping ...