XenDamager

Thank you very much. You pointed out some very interesting things which I will change. The lack of capitalization with the "I"s was simply an oversight, I will change it ...

sailing on the rainbow of your dreams I saw that which was not previously seen amidst the mist of your make believe through the tent of your ethereal screen the ...

I was reading this and of course I noted some spelling mishaps like Knew should be knew..Of course, I saw some places where my readers mind perceived that one word ...