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Hello! :D First of all, this is a sad poem, but it wanders a bit, if you know what I mean. Focus more on one subject, and then explore it. ...

Oh. My. Goodness. Every single person on here is beautiful! That’s amazing! Does Nate go though all the applications for YWS and only pick the pretty people? Wow. Everyone looks ...

Interesting poem. I like the idea of it, and the meaning. One thing, however, is the rhythm. Some parts, (especially the words “Never to be laughed at.”) just don’t sound ...

Well, I’m reading The Great and Terrible Quest by Margaret Lovett. I think it’s really good! It’s got a nice plot, adventure, and it’s Historical Fiction!

Hope you don't think it's too bad. Feel free to rip to shreds! :D -Y The Olden Days What happened to the ball gowns? To the the dusty ageing road? ...

Hello! Hmm, even though the rhythm is off, it still sounds good. I, like the other, feel you should dwell more on the people. Talk about the disgust on the ...

I’m not that familiar with sonnets, so I don’t know if this is good or bad, but the rhythm was off. Also, sometimes I didn’t quite understand what was happening. ...

Hello! I think you are a very good artist! I love the serpents face. It’s mouth especially. Ok, first of all, is that a beard or water on the serpents ...

Hello! I thought this was a good poem. The rythem was steady, and the ryming didn’t sound forced. The only part I didn’t like was: My neck- wet with sweat ...

Hello! Ok, well personally think that the rhythm is a bit off. Especially this part: Grim Reaper, Grim Reaper If I touch your sheath will I bleed? Grim Reaper, Grim ...

The rhythm is a little off sometimes. However, sense it doesn’t rhyme, it’s easier for you to get away with. Like everyone said, it doesn’t make much sense. Nice title. ...

Ok, this is not a very good poem to introduce myself with. I don’t like this poem. It’s so… repeating. I wrote it a while ago, and it is in ...

Review time! Interesting poem. I like the idea of it. Some of it didn’t read write for me, and the rhyme was a little off, but I think that gives ...

Yay, people replied! :D Windy: Nice to meet you! That’s so cool how we have the same birthday! You’re my new virtual twin! :D (I’ve always wanted a twin!) Peanut: ...

My first ever review. Here goes! This was kind of confusing for me. It seemed like the story was all over the place. It had a nice plot, though. I ...