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Wow, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Also, Pink, the chapter in all, not counting the first part, is about ten thousand words. I thought it wise to break it ...

Sorry that it's boring, I'll rewrite it. Wait for it.

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Wow, I really like it! It's a very original poem, with a very good description of what is the legend. I will try to review this. Forgive me if I ...

Oh, Shaard, it didn't break up. Here! I will help you. (Don't worry people, she asked me to, and I know the order of stanzas. In the time before The ...

One broken December we ran Together Alone Hand in hand We stopped not to look back again Ran ahead From ghosts Of the past In fear we kept our fleeting ...

It hurt, but I still had to move. And move fast. Scrambling through the trees as fast as I could, scratching every part of my body as I went, I ...

Deep my...whatever :lol: . Thank you for the advice, as I try to get my poems in the best condition they can be. I also think it's funny that everyon ...

*I have edited it according to those of you who gave me advice as to what is a bit too repetetive or other things. Thanks for the great ideas!* A ...

Beauty for pain A trick, not a trade I was swindled I was a fool To give up My face, plain For the pain That haunts me still Was the ...

Hahaha, nice, Shaard! I really like it. But still, spell check, girl, as I tell you. Also, see? I told you the story was amazing! You already have a fan!

Wow, thanks! I didn't really think so many people would approve. And actually, the fact that the story behind the poem is unknown, like how the father died, is on ...

Thanks

She looks down into the glassy black water Hoping to see some trace of her father But all she sees is her own pale face Small and alone in this ...