Wynnyr

I liked it. It did seem a bit choppy there in the middle, like you didn't know what train of thought to follow, but that might be the way you ...

I liked the repetition, but I thing more detail is needed. The pain of the person speaking isn't clearly illustrated, and in poems dealing with something this personal the pain ...

Hey My name is Erin, I'm 18 years old. I just figured I'd introduce myself since I'm new. Any suggestions about what to do here? I'm slightly overwhelmed....

Hey :) I'm Wynnyr, I'm 18, and much more of a Journalistic Writer but I figured i would give this a shot. :) I like the site so far...