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Re: Where am I going?
I liked it. It did seem a bit choppy there in the middle, like you didn't know what train of thought to follow, but that might be the way you ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: My Heroin
I liked the repetition, but I thing more detail is needed. The pain of the person speaking isn't clearly illustrated, and in poems dealing with something this personal the pain ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Hello Friends :)
Hey My name is Erin, I'm 18 years old. I just figured I'd introduce myself since I'm new. Any suggestions about what to do here? I'm slightly overwhelmed....
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hey :) I'm Wynnyr, I'm 18, and much more of a Journalistic Writer but I figured i would give this a shot. :) I like the site so far...
Dec 7, 2008