WrittenSoul

Thank you very much! :)

Hi Jon! Thank you for the compliments! I do see what you mean about her character and it's something I've often wondered about, but haven't known quite how to fix. ...

Hi Keri! Thank you for your useful feedback. I really like your suggestions and I'll be sure to use them. Commas are my nemisis in writing! (I never know where ...

Thanks so much everyone for the awesome reviews! :) rubberduck: What's with the double dates? Ha, uh, oops? I hadn't even realized I'd done that. So my answer to your ...

Thank you very much for your advice, I'll take all this into consideration. :) Also, thank you for letting me know about the 'they' factor -- after looking it over, ...

Thanks so much for all the fantastic reviews, everyone! They're very helpful, and I can definately see what you mean about a lot of the little things you've all been ...

Thank you so much for actually replying back! I know I put a lot in there so it might be a pain to read all of it, but I really ...

Thanks so much for the support! I am going to write more when I get around to it, though I'm currently writing about three other things that I haven't put ...