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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hell's Occupant - [Falling Contest - snowberry23]

    He watched her as she cried over his deathbed, her tears falling unto his lifeless hand that she held reverently in hers. Her bright halo of blond hair caressed her ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Hunt [in action]

    Arose entered the building cautiously, her gaze roaming the desolate tavern. She licked her chapped lips, spotting the tavern's storage entrance not far from where she stood. Her hood fell ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Hunt [in action]

    "No." the harsh refusal made her blink, but no more. She dare not bother offering once more, but her persistence was rightly deserved considering she had been to poison him ...

    Jul 22, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Hunt [in action]

    "... Hideous creatures," he said as his lip curled. "She made a very pretty flame, though. Bright blue." Arose felt her nails bite into her palms, and she could feel ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Hunt [in action]

    A smile ghosted onto her pale, procelain-colored face. The dusting of freckles upon her nose becoming darker against her pale flesh as she dipped her head in appology for her ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Hunt [in action]

    Arose carefully made her way across the street, her dress buttoned up to her throat and her shawl warding some of the chill to the evening air. Her red hair ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Hunt [in action]

    Name: Arose Gadrielle Gender: Female Age: 20 Description of Appearance and Picture: nearly five foot two, with a shapely build. Has long, wavy red hair that she normally weaves into ...

    Jul 20, 2011
  • Writers Corner Re: How do I make the reader care about my characters?

    What I do when I want my readers to feel for the characters would be - like the user above me - I put them in some bad situations.. Like ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Prologue

    Author's Note; Hello there, if you’ve come to read up on one of my stories then I’m glad to be able to clarify a few things just before your entertaining ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Are you writing a novel?

    I voted that I am, in fact, writting a novel in the current tense. It is titled "Freedom within the Flames". The original title was Freedom by Fire, a translation ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Archive Re: What would happen if?

    Zachary - Untamed Fury (Title under advisement) He shifted on the padded leather of the sofa on which he lay, the tension slowly melting from his muscles as he closed ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Posies

    Hi there, I'm going to review for you - hey look - i'm a poet and i didn't even know it! Wait, no! I knew it. "... I'mm(a) scoop up ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Jumped

    As with the first reader and critique-er I will have to agree that the cliched romance theme does get a tad bit over-cooked. Though I like how you displayed the ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Jumped

    As with the first reader and critique-er I will have to agree that the cliched romance theme does get a tad bit over-cooked. Though I like how you displayed the ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Jumped

    As with the first reader and critique-er I will have to agree that the cliched romance theme does get a tad bit over-cooked. Though I like how you displayed the ...

    Jun 25, 2011


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