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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Left Behind

    Hi there, I'll be your reviewer today. I honestly have to admit that non-rhyming poems strike me like a giant flyswater in the face, because I normally find them horribly ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Fox's Hunt

    The Fox’s Hunt Hidden amidst the shadows, Deep within the thicket of trees, Green eyes keep watch, Harbouring truths and mysteries. A movement shifts the darkness, The slender red body ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A single wish.

    A single wish. A single star is agleam tonight, it's feeble glow no match for the moonlight, but it is seen from down below, those pairs of eyes, it's path ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Archive Re: The Hunt [in action]

    Arose licked her lips as she turned around, glancing briefly at Amerine. "Follow me, we're leaving. Now." she ground between clenched teeth, her silken cloak wrapped tightly around her bodice. ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Hounds of Autumn

    I very much liked this piece of work you've done, the narrative style isn't normally my first choice to read but I do have to say that this seems very ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Ban the User Above You [6]

    ... Banned for having 385 points. XDD

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Man

    Hiyaa, the names Wisp. As Demoness had the gall to say this was a wonderful read and it did flow very nicely. I enjoyed reading it, the whole thing was ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Dear Momma

    Hiyaa, the names Wisp and I'll be your reviewer today. The first thing that comes to mind when reading this beautiful poem is; "This is amazing". I swear, I started ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The boy you have to watch

    Alright, this has potential but I do believe it needs to be fixed. "The boy you have to watch Who never shows his heart, Listens to beets, -- try ; ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The boy you have to watch

    Alright, this has potential but I do believe it needs to be fixed. "The boy you have to watch Who never shows his heart, Listens to beets, -- try ; ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Deathbed

    I can't tear this apart, it's too beautiful; too filled with emotion to destroy it's foundation and so I can only say that I loved each stanza and hoped that ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: thomas sabo

    That's because it IS half of a conversation, the apparent other half was seemingly deleted -- or it vanished.

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Dreams Tell Lies...(EDIT)

    Ohh, crackers! I actually very much liked this book cover and I'm jealous that I didn't get one first. ;) The light colors of the picture and the font really ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: thomas sabo

    Right, well. I truly doubt that this is the correct place to post these and so I don't really know why I'm reviewing but I'd like to say that I ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: I will learn how to live, when I learn how to die

    Right, the name's Wisp but you can call me "Reviewer" 'cause that's who I'm going to be at the moment. First thing's first, I advise you - seriously - to ...

    Aug 12, 2011


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart