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Re: Left Behind
Hi there, I'll be your reviewer today. I honestly have to admit that non-rhyming poems strike me like a giant flyswater in the face, because I normally find them horribly ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: The Fox's Hunt
The Fox’s Hunt Hidden amidst the shadows, Deep within the thicket of trees, Green eyes keep watch, Harbouring truths and mysteries. A movement shifts the darkness, The slender red body ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: A single wish.
A single wish. A single star is agleam tonight, it's feeble glow no match for the moonlight, but it is seen from down below, those pairs of eyes, it's path ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: The Hunt [in action]
Arose licked her lips as she turned around, glancing briefly at Amerine. "Follow me, we're leaving. Now." she ground between clenched teeth, her silken cloak wrapped tightly around her bodice. ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: The Hounds of Autumn
I very much liked this piece of work you've done, the narrative style isn't normally my first choice to read but I do have to say that this seems very ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
... Banned for having 385 points. XDD
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Man
Hiyaa, the names Wisp. As Demoness had the gall to say this was a wonderful read and it did flow very nicely. I enjoyed reading it, the whole thing was ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Dear Momma
Hiyaa, the names Wisp and I'll be your reviewer today. The first thing that comes to mind when reading this beautiful poem is; "This is amazing". I swear, I started ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: The boy you have to watch
Alright, this has potential but I do believe it needs to be fixed. "The boy you have to watch Who never shows his heart, Listens to beets, -- try ; ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: The boy you have to watch
Alright, this has potential but I do believe it needs to be fixed. "The boy you have to watch Who never shows his heart, Listens to beets, -- try ; ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Deathbed
I can't tear this apart, it's too beautiful; too filled with emotion to destroy it's foundation and so I can only say that I loved each stanza and hoped that ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: thomas sabo
That's because it IS half of a conversation, the apparent other half was seemingly deleted -- or it vanished.
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies...(EDIT)
Ohh, crackers! I actually very much liked this book cover and I'm jealous that I didn't get one first. ;) The light colors of the picture and the font really ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: thomas sabo
Right, well. I truly doubt that this is the correct place to post these and so I don't really know why I'm reviewing but I'd like to say that I ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: I will learn how to live, when I learn how to die
Right, the name's Wisp but you can call me "Reviewer" 'cause that's who I'm going to be at the moment. First thing's first, I advise you - seriously - to ...
Aug 12, 2011
