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Re: The White Crow
The White Crow One wings of white feathers agleam, is brought the news. The white crow screams: "The dead they walk skin pale as snow, tonight they come, empty eyes ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Forever Midnight
Forever Midnight It slips between interlocked fingers, as grains of sand from within an hourglass. It is as elusive as the air we breath, as might a shadow elude our ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Winter World
Hi, to all those who will read and/or review this poem I'd like to mention the fact that there are not supposed to be any stanzas. Think of this as ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Wishing Well
Hi, to all those reading and/or reviewing this poem I'd like to ask a bit of advice for the punctuation. The format of this poem is a bit strange and ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Playing with Matches
Hi, call me Written and I'll be your reviewer for the time being. My first impression of this poem was a little something like this: "Whoa, a pyromancer poem, but ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: A Nightmare's Come
Hi, to all those who've come to read my poem I'd like to give a little heads-up that this poem is not supposed to be rhyming or actually well structured ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: To Become A Hero (Remembrance Day)
To Become A Hero. A path this man has taken, Amidst warriors he must stand, To fight for his country's freedom, Enemy blood stains foreign land. His family prays for ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Painted Marionette
Hi, if you've decided to read this spoiler then I am greatly thankful, because it grants me the chance to explain the very many errors that are ever-present in this ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Writer's Nightmare
Hi, I'll be a reviewer for today; my name is Writteninstone or Wisp as some like to call me -- however today I will be critiquing this particular piece of ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Venus Flytrap -
Prologue "Dancing bears, Painted wings. Things I almost remember, and a song someone sings Once upon a December. Someone holds me safe and warm, Horses prance through a silver storm, ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: I see.
Hi, if you've read any of my previous poems I'm sure you'll know that I don't usually write things that are cliche or non-inspiring. If you haven't read any of ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (18)
Hiyaa, my name is writteninstone and I'll be your reviewer for moment. Note - please take my advice seriously but not harshly as I do not mean any offence towards ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Do not fear (9.11)
Do not fear. In memory of 9.11 Her child does cry in sudden fright, their very world shall end tonight, this mother’s heart races in her chest, she cradles her ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Window
Hello, I will be your ... third - I suppose - reviewer today and I would like to begin with my general impression which was the this poem has wonderful ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Love is Blind- A Warriors Fanfic (Please help me out!)
Ah, hello I'll be your reviewer today so I hope you accept my review with kind-hearted intentions and without malice. My first impression of this fanfic was that it was ...
Sep 19, 2011
